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有關(guān)交通工具與事故的英語(yǔ)作文
Road Accidents 道路交通事故
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)道路事故會(huì)給人們的生命和財(cái)產(chǎn)帶來(lái)很大的損失
2)分析道路事故發(fā)生的主要原因
3)如何降低事故發(fā)生率
Road Accidents
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)問(wèn)題，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析造成該問(wèn)題的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求說(shuō)明解決該問(wèn)題的方法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問(wèn)題解決型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出道路事故的嚴(yán)重性及主要危害;分析導(dǎo)致道路事故的主要原因;說(shuō)明應(yīng)該如何降低道路事故的發(fā)生率。
高分范文
Road Accidents
Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives.
[3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.
[7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.
道路交通事故，作為一個(gè)重要的社會(huì)問(wèn)題，一直倍受關(guān)注。在大多數(shù)大城市，每天有不少交通事故發(fā)生。在這些事故中，許多人遭受重大財(cái)產(chǎn)損失，他們中的一些人甚至失去了他們的生命。
下列原因?qū)е陆煌ㄊ鹿省Ｊ紫龋煌ㄗ兊迷絹?lái)越擁擠，尤其是在大城市。道路越來(lái)越多的車(chē)輛增加事故發(fā)生的幾率。此外，許多司機(jī)缺乏安全意識(shí)，甚至不遵守交通規(guī)則。例如，一些司機(jī)闖紅燈或酒醉后駕車(chē)。另外，薄弱的監(jiān)督管理交通控制部門(mén)是一個(gè)不可忽視的原因。
考慮到交通問(wèn)題的嚴(yán)重性，現(xiàn)在是我們采取更有效的措施來(lái)解決的時(shí)候。首先，政府應(yīng)該投資更多的錢(qián)來(lái)改善公共交通，為市民提供更多選擇的運(yùn)輸方式。其次，嚴(yán)格的法律和法規(guī)應(yīng)懲罰那些違反交通法規(guī)的人。最后，司機(jī)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)安全意識(shí)，養(yǎng)成良好的駕駛習(xí)慣。只有這樣才能成功避免道路交通事故。
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
[1]插入語(yǔ)，as意為“作為”。
[2]表遞進(jìn)。
[3]用于引出原因。
[4]過(guò)渡銜接詞語(yǔ)，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[5]“增加了…的機(jī)會(huì)或可能性”。
[6]“監(jiān)管不力”，weak的使用準(zhǔn)確地道。
[7]“考慮到，鑒于”，介詞。
[8]用于引出解決辦法，表示解決問(wèn)題的緊迫性,常譯為“早該是…的時(shí)候了”。
[9]“only+狀語(yǔ)”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。
佳句臨摹
1.佳句：In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.
臨摹：一些人失敗后可能會(huì)變得灰心喪氣，甚至?xí)艞壋晒Φ南Ｍ?/p>
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2.佳句：More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.
臨摹：許多學(xué)生認(rèn)為考取更多的證書(shū)可以增加他們找工作的機(jī)會(huì)。
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3.佳句：It is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.
臨摹：因此，我們?cè)缭撽P(guān)注一下人口過(guò)剩問(wèn)題了。
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【KEY】
1. Some people, after a failure, may become discouraged and even give up their hope for success.
2. Many students believe that more certificates may increase the chances of their being employed.
3. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.
Bikes and Cars 自行車(chē)和汽車(chē)
I like going to school by like, because I think I can keep healthy by riding. Bicycles are still popular in Beijing. Some foreigners buy bicycles to ride. But more and more people buy cars because they think they are faster than bicycles. In fact the exhaust gas from cars makes the air dirty and they waste energy.I think bicycles are better than cars.
Bicycles are still popular in Beijing. It's convenient to go to school or go to work by bike. It can help people to keep healthy.But more and more people buy cars because they think they are faster than bicycles. The exhaust gas from cars pollutes the air and they waste energy. I prefer riding bicycles because it is cheap and keeps the air clean.
我喜歡騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)，因?yàn)槲铱梢酝ㄟ^(guò)騎車(chē)保持健康。北京依然流行自行車(chē)，一些外國(guó)人也買(mǎi)自行車(chē)騎。但是越來(lái)越多的人買(mǎi)汽車(chē)，因?yàn)樗麄冋J(rèn)為汽車(chē)比自行車(chē)快。事實(shí)上，汽車(chē)尾氣污染了空氣，浪費(fèi)能源。我認(rèn)為自行車(chē)比汽車(chē)好。
自行車(chē)在北京依然很流行，騎車(chē)上學(xué)或上班很方便，它能幫助人們保持健康。但是越來(lái)越多的人買(mǎi)汽車(chē)，因?yàn)樗麄冋J(rèn)為汽車(chē)比自行車(chē)快。汽車(chē)的尾氣污染了空氣，浪費(fèi)了能源。我喜歡騎車(chē)因?yàn)樗阋瞬⑶也粫?huì)污染空氣。
車(chē)禍現(xiàn)場(chǎng)An Eye Witness Account of a Traffic Accident
My name is Liming. I am studying at college. A week ago I saw a traffic accident, which is still vivid in my mind.
It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th, when I went out of the university to visit a friend of mine at another university. I was walking leisurely on the sidewalk when I heard a loud crash of two vehicles just at the T?junction about 10 metres away. Two taxis crashed together. It was a traffic accident.
I went up and found that the two taxis were badly damaged. Both hoofs were out of shape. One door of a car was knocked off and lying on the road. One driver was bleeding and another was shut in the taxi. Some people were trying to help the driver get out of the damaged car. One man was calling the traffic policeman station. A lot of cars were jammed on the road.
From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast. But it is just one of the reasons. In my opinion, the taxi drivers are eager to take more passengers and make a little more money. On the other hand, both drivers don’t show concern for one another. Both of them wanted to run in front of another. Therefore, the accident is inevitable. So far, we should let the drivers keep it in their mind that a little slower, a little safer. Taking care of others’ lives means taking care of your own life.
我的名字是黎明。我就讀于大學(xué)。一個(gè)星期前，我看到一宗交通意外，仍然是歷歷在目。這是在9:00左右在星期六早上，6月15日，當(dāng)我走出大學(xué)在另一所大學(xué)參觀我的一個(gè)朋友。我悠閑地走在人行道上時(shí)，我聽(tīng)到兩車(chē)一聲巨響只是在T？離路口約10米。兩輛出租車(chē)一起墜毀。這是一宗交通意外。我去了，發(fā)現(xiàn)兩輛出租車(chē)被嚴(yán)重?fù)p壞。這兩個(gè)蹄子都變了形。一輛汽車(chē)的一個(gè)門(mén)被打掉，躺在馬路上。一名司機(jī)受傷流血，另一人被關(guān)在出租車(chē)上了。有些人試圖幫助駕駛員走出損壞的汽車(chē)。一名男子致電交警站。很多車(chē)被卡在路上。從道路上停車(chē)軌道，很顯然，這兩個(gè)輛出租車(chē)開(kāi)得太快。但它僅僅是原因之一。在我看來(lái)，出租車(chē)司機(jī)都急于采取更多的乘客，讓多一點(diǎn)錢(qián)。另一方面，這兩個(gè)驅(qū)動(dòng)程序不關(guān)心彼此。他們都希望在另一條戰(zhàn)線上運(yùn)行。因此，事故是不可避免的。到目前為止，我們應(yīng)該讓司機(jī)保持在他們的心目中，一個(gè)慢一點(diǎn)，安全一點(diǎn)。以他人的生活護(hù)理是指把你自己的生命負(fù)責(zé)。
ACCIDENT REPORT 事故報(bào)告
There was a car accident on Shanghai Road at 10:30 a.m.on 25th May. A girl was talking with her friend while riding on the road. Suddenly a car came from behind and hit her. The girl fell onto the ground and could not get up. Her friend shouted for help. Luckily, a policeman arrived in time and took the girl to the nearest hospital. The doctor looked her over carefully. Her head and leg were hurt badly. She must stay in hospital for two weeks. The girl’s parents came and thanked the policeman very much. Some of the girl’s classmates came to visit her and said they would help her with her lessons.
上海路上有車(chē)禍10:30第二十五。一個(gè)女孩正和她的朋友在路上騎車(chē)。突然一輛汽車(chē)從后面撞到她。女孩掉到地上，不能起來(lái)了。她的朋友喊救命。幸運(yùn)的是，一名警察及時(shí)趕到，把女孩帶到了最近的醫(yī)院。醫(yī)生仔細(xì)地打量了她。她的頭部和腿部受到了嚴(yán)重的傷害。她必須待在醫(yī)院里呆2個(gè)星期。女孩的父母來(lái)了，非常感謝警察。一些女孩的同學(xué)來(lái)看望她，說(shuō)他們將幫助她與她的課。
滿分作文:私家車(chē)越來(lái)越多 Private cars more and more
With the development of economics as well as the improving life standard, more and more people possess private cars
.隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展和生活水平的提高，越來(lái)越多的人擁有私家車(chē)。
As each coin has two sides, there are also disadvantages in such a trend. First of all, the air and noise pollution is undoubtedly going from bad to worse. The poisonous gas the private cars send out is not only of great harm to the environment around us, but to our human bodies as well, especially to the respiratory systems. Private cars, of their owners most are new drivers, meanwhile, are consequently easy to result in traffic jams or even accidents. You can imagine how worrying the situation can be when you are in a hurry!
由于每個(gè)硬幣都有兩面，在這樣一種趨勢(shì)中也有缺點(diǎn)。首先，空氣和噪音污染，無(wú)疑是從壞到更壞。私家車(chē)發(fā)出的有毒氣體不僅對(duì)我們周?chē)沫h(huán)境有很大的危害，而且對(duì)我們的人體也一樣，特別是對(duì)呼吸系統(tǒng)。私家車(chē)，車(chē)主最新司機(jī)，同時(shí)，也因此容易導(dǎo)致交通擁堵，甚至發(fā)生意外。你可以想象你在匆忙中的情況有多令人擔(dān)憂！
Such being the case, some iMMediate measures must be taken to prevent it in my opinion. For instance, we should pay more attention to the environmental protection to refresh the air, if possible, to reduce the noise level. It is expected that more advanced technology can make it a reality to replace the poisonous gas with one which both saves energy and causes no harm, thus making our daily life more satisfying!
既然如此，必須采取一些直接措施來(lái)阻止它在我看來(lái)。例如，我們應(yīng)該更加注意環(huán)保，以刷新空氣，如果可能的話，以減少噪音水平。預(yù)計(jì)更先進(jìn)的技術(shù)可以使它成為現(xiàn)實(shí)，以取代有毒氣體與一個(gè)既節(jié)省能源又不造成傷害，從而使我們的日常生活更令人滿意！
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